Nice little tune you got here. Pretty excellent vocals. I agree that it sounds retro, but I agree with the previous comment that changing the drums, could give this a updated sound (if that's what you want). Your lyrics are very well-written, and convey a lot of double meanings, which is not easy to do with subtlety, but you achieve highly.
Pretty cewl...I like the guitar sound. The beat could be different, maybe more techno-pop? Yummy song spoon-girl!
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