Hey!

This is my first own complete song!
Thanks to Steven (RazoR) for the vocals and playing some synth parts.
Thanks to Michel for playing the guitar parts.

I'm more into the punk/ska/reggae music, so a bit different to most songs I've heard here on bandamp.

Just hope you like it!
Comments are always welcome!

Greetings!

Ahhhh....


   Better... the whole song!!  Woo HOoO


        now, again...


    I really like this one... the synth is great...  Mix is great...   Not much criticism to be given... great job...

                   Jim K

very nice... I absolutely LOVE those synth bell things... totally, cool.

vocals at 1:30 are sweet. literally. sweet.

my only criticism is that there isn't much feeling in the vocals. it almost sounds more like spoken word...

but I really liked the song. very nice.

yes really nice song it rocks...
You have a good voice, practice it a bit... so you can give more expression to the lyrics...
but hey the chorus is a catchy tune.... I love it... It's a bit like the old offspring stuff.... but I already prefer your voice...
just one wish... make it longer, add another verse...

Very good song  I like the weird tune to it.
No complaints besides in the beginning if you were to make the music a little louder so that it were to blend with your vocals but um yeah other then that it was very good.

SWEEET bell synth! It makes the song.

The fade-out is done quite well, that's hard to do.

A much different style than we usually get. Quite refreshing. I'm a ska fan as well, written a
couple of songs, it's great stuff.

Well put together, the synth is so out there, its really cool.

i like the song and the mix and all, just the singin could be more energetic to me, and guitars are mixed a bit soft for me

great work, even without considering it is your first one , those bells are very well done, guitars too!

i'll look out for your second song

one question.....



     What are you doing in the song??   I mean Michael is playing the guitar, and Steven is playing the synth, and vocals...  

    So where are you????????????    

            Jim K

Haha! Well I just came up with the whole idea of the music and the theme for the lyrics and played everything myself but...

Since I'm not a keyboard player I had some false notes in some parts I didn't recognize myself, so Steven changed them for me.

The original song also had the distorted guitar in the chorus part, but I wanted to change that to demped guitar. But... I couldn't catch up with the speed (at least not for long like the outro) for the chorus part, so Michael played those parts for me

So basically they added some parts I figured out but couldn't play 100% myself.

The lyrics where totally sung by Steven (RazoR) since we formed a band back then, and he's the one with the best voice

Steven/Michel and I were still a band one month ago, on RazoR's profile are some songs we made during our band period like: Staring at the wall, Cruelty and Sinners.

Greetz!

I was wondering.......


     Now it all makes sense.....    Good work dude....

                    Jim K

like summer song........guitar very good..
waiting for your next song....brother

Bob  I love this song...your voice Rocks Razor   as does the song     Rock on  

your friend

Ralph


Thax for your help Bob...I added some songs FROM THE Audaciity PROGRAM.... hope they turned out''


ROCK On BOB

Thanks for loving my voice gheheh    ( I sung in the song)

But the whole idea with guitars is Bob's , it's great.

RazoR

I really like this song nice job man! very... different from others songs, as you say. but in a very positive way! keep up the work

Just for the record, my name is Michel...not Michael