Speechless

I like the slowly quickening pace (and increasing volume) of the song. Very good, and clever lyrics as well.

Usually I lose interest in songs over 4 mins (as they frequently get repetitive), but yours keeps it very well.
Superb.

well.......

       
          Here it is dude......

              I am sorry to say.......

                    But I feel I must.... Since noone else will tell ya.......

                        This is well........  hmm......... How do I say this.........
 
                   Without upseting you....... and making you cry.......

               I know how sensitive you are........ and well..........

           ok....... here goes.............










                                    

all 3 thums up

Listen everyone, that is not the sound of a heartbeat...........
....its the sound of me and the mice knocking on Tackys garage door cos we want him to come out and play.....in the Lab.
  My my, you give us so much at one time....yes you do.
Id like to hear you on a couple of tracks ive done...it would be an honour if you would even just contemplate the offer...We at the Lab think that your thinking the same way were thinking, that were both thinking that it could be interesting. Top banana Tacky. Top banana......you wanna jam?    Im dusting the Juno in anticipation........

Excellent excellent song, compsition and production. I am honoured to compete against you this June battle, you make great competition. The only thing, is that the drum beat at the beginning is very Dave Mathews, but of course that's good. I like the way it ends, like how it fakes an end, then comes back then fades and the heartbeat!!! Very very nice. I vote high!!!!

this one is very good indeed;) can't seem to get enough of your songs

thanks for commenting/voting everyone!

it's nearly there...

and to Hal... sounds like a plan.

my first 100% vote..

well i guess thats enough???

this vote will complete ur 20 votes..
i am lucky for u man..
i guess??

Man, this song is not a song that would be on my everyday menu, but this song have something that carries me on. It`s very nice, have great intro, and you voice are great in song....

Good work!

Hey , Taka , a very good one again! you have my vote      

wow thanks everyone!

I LOVE it......

   as all of your songs...... You are so talented....

You will be famous one day,...... remember us!   LOL


Great song............


-NT4M

Excellent use of melodic lines and instruments, production is top notch.

You know i just realized we seem to have a similar style.  I really like the electronica aspects, didn't quite feel the vocals but the intro melodies are amasing.