I'm amazed this is outstanding. It's hard to believe your only 16. I love the chord changes. If your already writing like this, I can see a great future for you in music.
The guitar hormonics on the intro are a nice touch

I listen to your songs a lot Tess, you have an amazing talent.

hope to see you on stage doing festivals across europe one day.

good luck!

I like it, the vox could come up in the mix though!

This has to be one of the finest songs I have heard...no BULL.....Its really great Tess...
And I agree That you have a hit song here...your song.......your voice is really nice...love the guitar(s)......My hat is off to you on this song...Its funny how a song comes to us at times when we dont expect it........

Ralph

this is nice.

 I like it. your voice is very nice.

     Dusty

I'm new here. Your voice reminds me of Cheryl Crow, which is a compliment. Nice vocal and guitar work. I'd like to hear more from the bass guitars, but I like Rush, so it tends to pollute my opinions...

I'd like to hear drums, too, but I could see why you left them out...it might really make the song run into the power ballad territory, which is what I happen to love (Journey, and so on), but it's not everyone's thing.

Not sure if I like the high acoustic strings so present or not...they might come back a tiny bit, so you could hear the electric guitar as well, and the bass. Good with the idea of using mics for the guitar, most people would use DI, which can be kinda flat sounding.

Are these mixed to "stereo mixdown" on your computer program? While it's a very nice recording, to be darn sure, it feels like they're still separate tracks. Just curious if I'm hearing right, it's one of the things I'm trying to train my ears for...stop by and see my tunes

nice intro. nice bass build. I was waiting for the chorus build and very nice. Your voice is great. This quality could almost be on the radio. Like the top 10 kind of stuff.    Sweet guitar lead. Yes, and the ending was smooth and gentle. Very good Tess!..Have a great day and keep up the creativity. Nothing is more better than when a musician plays their style and heart in song!.....jgv