This one's about a girl who gets kidnapped... hope you like it.

- tess

nice! well played and recorded, nice building up, i wonder how it would sound with bass and drum..,

great i think!

its got bass in it. loads of it. lol

A well composed tune. Guitars are very good esp. timing and dynamics.

Excellent song

Lurvley!!!
What a bucket full of talent you have Tess

Guitars sound great, nicely played with loads of passion.
Vocals very good, as usual
And the bass (which is obvious - come on Max, open your ears to those low frequencies!!) blends in nicely without being overstated or too punchy.
I'd like to hear this with drums added - I think they're a necessary addition to what's already a great song.

well i did listen to it on my laptop speakers(2 cm each, not much bass there ), 
No, but i really ment a rhythmsection, which is usual, bass ánd drum (to me)
so, sorry for mistaking   

one of the best voices on bandamp-great mix!!

great....................intro lovely
first voc intro soft  'are we.'...........
vocs slightly lost in rhythm guitars...........
yes mix a bit iffy............
yeah the 6 string too much all the way,,,,,
nice elec solo............drums?..........percussion........to push along?
great end.

review on the fly..........the fish

written as i heard it

love it got my vote

Just beautiful!
I think the "no percussions" thing goes great with this song, but I think a light bongo would mak me pay for this song. Excellent job on the use of the electric guitar btw, thats something I would dare to do. It takes guts, lol.

this is great, you can really write mad songs (and no i didn't just figure that out now!)

As usual you put up a great performance in your recording, i dont think drums would make much of a different, maybe a little bit better but if you don't play drums and don't have a drum kit... its a lot of hassle... and i would DEFINITELY would stay away from those MIDI drums with this song.

As for the mix, great, i like where you placed the electric guitar, vocals are fine where they are but just i would recommend turning down the acoustic guitar a little bit... it's a little bit draining, it effects the song EVER so slightly but since it's such an awesome song i can't really write up much of a critique unless I looked at really really small things because this is just very good!

Well done

Sounds really good mate, liking the solo, wot inspired the song?

"Sounds really good mate, liking the solo, wot inspired the song?"


i was playing high and dry by radiohead and i started playing this riff and it jus sounded so sweet ... so i kept playing it - the words "locked in the cellar " came up when i was improv singing to it and i based the song around that.

this is one of my best songs i think, a guy i work with (on my music) thinks this is my hit song. really proud of that 

cheers for comments people.

- Tess

heartfelt , intense.... really like the 'pring!'  guitar harmonic.... love the last hanging chord everytime....absolutely requires drums ... very good song... balance out the acoustic gat... a higher vocal harmony for the pain maybe.... yeah i am so bold as to suggest

very nice song. I like the chorus a lot. not especially my style of music but I like it. 

Hey, Tess, long time since I hadn't listened to any of your songs, and must say this was lovely.
I liked it a lot. The acoustic guitars sounds really clean and natural and the electric guitar makes his job pretty well. The voices harmonies are great; your voice is great.
good tune, I liked it a lot.

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