Ok mate it's not a charity/mercy vote you understand catchy as hell.
What a champ

nice tune and great work Isz...to think that your only 18...so much more to come in the way of music  for you and for us to hear...nice  sound..good lyrics...good mix...cant imagine what i would change...just a overall good song

Ralph

May be it's not my best song, but means a lot to me.

         > Iszil

hope i voted my 90 in time....

great ballad!

Into the battle!

        > Iszil

Pro: It's a well built song.  The different sections fit well together. The vocals were nice.  The guitar work was good.

Con:  That sixteenth notes on the high hat are an albatross around your neck.  The snare tone doesn't really match the song either.  The guitar solo was a bit whack, it sounds like you improvised it.

Suggestions:
Dig around and see if you have a "brush on snare" sound in your midi kit.  Work on your guitar solo.  Script out your entire drum line with better and more appropriate rythms (also you might want to shell out for a better sound kit).  Your percussion track is what's holding you back at this point.

Man I'm listening to it for the second time now and I want smash your high hat to little pieces.

had to come back to this to rate it .... its really good IZ

Flyer

Come on, guys!
Vote!

         > Iszil

very nice!
i liked it a lot