Hope you like this new version, with more voice arrangements.


         > Iszil

first the good:
its an awesome song.
your voice is phantastic. you are a great singer
the buildup is superb.
ready for being great

and the bad:
the drums are obviously too synthetic and dont fit the song at all. same to the strings. You can play better git solos. I know this

and now the last:
dont hit me now I am a good one

 

Do you wanna play the strings, done with keyboard, of course? I can send you the score of the keyboard part.
That could help.
And I can re-do the drums to make them more real if you tell me what makes them sound unreal.

         > Iszil

This piece is so organic and excellent produced. It sounds so real. I also like the lyrics and the harmonic male singing

Okay - you did great, and I mean GREAT, on the vocal production!!! , and, as TK said - less good on the strings sound... plus the drums are very "power rock" like with the continuous and very present ride-like cymbal sound. I'd suggest using more "tender" sounds for the snare and toms too - but this is just technical criticism, the song itself it very very nice. not my style, but well constructed. I've been listening to the Byrds lately and this piece gives me the same kindof soothing feel.

So well done! but no 100%

Hai Iszel,...This a much more open structure its a good development.You did a more(like) classic approach,... i really need to say:brilliant move.
And then this is still your style :keep up the good work.   You have got my vote.

Hey Iz..................

U R getting better with every release.......... i agree with tkbd that you can get a better solo out of your axe



v high vote................. Hey man its a ballad!!!!!!




splash

Thanks.
Ok, I guess I'll have to re-do the solo, the drums and the strings ( waiting for swordfish Edirol Orchestra software). Lol.
And thanks for saying my voice is good.

         > Iszil

Well, now entered to June Battle, so I hope you give me some high ratings, guys.

         > Iszil

ISZIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

     I LOVE THIS SONG!!!



      This is GREAT!!  Keep them coming!!   I know you can!!



    Talk to you soon!.....  You are a TERRIFIC KID
    Love ya Dude!

OK, fucking awesome acoustic riff. I love it. I love it so much. Your voice sounds great man.

- Chester

Iszil  rocks. Love your guitar playing I'm amazed at the quality of sound you get.
The song is great love the chord changes. I know this is going to sound weird, but
you might listen to Kenny Burrell, or Joe Pass, Wes Montgomery,to get a diffrent
style under your belt(it'll open up your lead playing). I say this because your talented
enough to tackle these greats. your song get high marks.

Sta bueno el tema, es bastante quimerico y profundo, q efectos usa el guitarrista?? excelente tema, revisa a OvO Alergy y Habea

Next song in Battle!
Check and give good ratings!

        > Iszil "Fire Hand"

Battle is almost over and I just have 9 votes!
Come on! Vote!

          > Iszil