I couldn't run,
And all of the etchings on the walls,
Suggested there'd been no apparent leisure here at all.


Brilliant,nice song.

I could swear I heard this progression earlier today on another ampers guitar song(slight variation). It lends itself to great vocals and feeling. You are a superb musician and songwriter where are you playing, I might get a plane ticket to come see you sometime.

It's decided, before going to uni I'm gonna take a trip down to N-Z to come and see you play! This song is brilliant. The violin at the chorus is a nice touch, the song sound real professional. Congrats on another song awesomely done.

I love the lyrics, the pain...

Easy on the ears, I love the upright bass in the chorus and the bow sound enriches the sadness. It's great that you weren't afraid of using the dissonance with the chromatic at the start, it is a great tool (is that the word?) to find a better resolution and keep the listener intrigued. You have a wonderful voice, three cheers for the sad song!

Great content across your range of songs.

Nice to hear somebody not afraid to just write, play and sing without trying to fit a genre.

Excellent