Is it over yet?Very good vision and musicianship but way to long and the same do do do doo, do do doo over and over again.The highlight for me are the lyrics.

You can tell you're really working hard at this piece. Like the guitar line at around 1:30. I like the was the bass and the guitar come together at about the 4 minute mark.

Vocally, breathe more-never hold your breath. Once you can control the way that the air moves, you'll really become powerful as a singer. Sometimes it sounds like you forgot to breathe, so you end up gasping or inhaling in the middle of a phrase. Usually, you end up breathing just before a sentence or phrase, or wherever there'd be a comma if it were written. I can see your influence, plus something a bit harder at 8 minutes or so. Don't know what it reminds me of. Like the ending a lot, that riff will likely stick in my head like mental oatmeal! This is good, mind you...

This is your third song i heard, and im really liking your music.  I like your guitar playing and vocals.  Your not that great of a singer, but I like your voice.  It fits good with the music.  I really like your music a lot.  If you ever put out a cd, I would consider buying it.

Sounds pretty professional, like a studio recording, it's nice
It's grundgy

Simply, I joined

This is a great rock tune and the guitar is awesome.  BRILLIANT.

WillyBob