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#1April 1st, 2006 · 03:33 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
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Loads of Rock here... an other styles.
This is the next song after Mental Trap; for the ones who knows it you will realize it follows the same musical line.

In this song I played guitars ( electric and acoustics), bass ( not good bass player), flute ( neither a good Ian Anderson, but I did my best), and I sing ( nor a Bocelli or a Geddy Lee, but tried to sing well).

Mixed some styles here, like Rock music with funk and celtic, to give it a nice touch.

Hope you like, and I promise you won't get bored. Worked hard on this one.

PS: Any mistake, please tell me.


Purple hazes of toxic gases
Covering the sky, darkening my sight
Clouds are closing, itís getting dim
Bodyís twisting; feel in a dream

Hey you! The red-eyed man
Take me out, is a command
But a part of me wanna stay
May be I like it, may be I donít care

Take it easy, you are not alone
The ache is only your comfort
Itís not a question, itís just a fact
But you must walk, itís a long path

A rope is rolling around my neck
The same that caused Judas death
I try to breath, I try to scape
Iím getting desperate; it is too late

The fallen angels fly again
The earth is moving; it seems the end
And this is not a way to die
In a scary place. Run, I might?

Wonít this stop? wonít this cease?
Will I resist? Will I break free?
This overcomes me, Iím not that strong
Oh, god! Help me; Iím another moron

The sun is shinning, the birds now sing
The green is growing; I can live
The calm is returning, my bodyís rested
I feel sleepy; pillow under head

        > Iszil

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#2April 1st, 2006 · 11:11 PM
34 threads / 16 songs
538 posts
awsome guitar lines.. as always! but I think you really sorted very well the overall composition of the piece on this one specially, with just the right moments of calm to keep attention. 

Love the styles mixture you have here.

Maybe the only thing I don't "agree" completly with is the fact that sometimes the song seems to be constructed FOR the guitar parts and not the guitar parts for the song... but  that's not bad at all, at least in this case, and it's a common thing on all great guitar players.
#3April 2nd, 2006 · 08:24 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
41 posts
Awesome Work!!

U got style.

I agree with aetheris on everything he said.....

#4April 2nd, 2006 · 12:20 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America

     Very well done....   The Drums sound great... The guitar work is incredible.....

   You are getting better and better at making this stuff sound so professional... This is really good....

      I can't say anything bad about it.... 

                Way to go......

                         Jim "Da Sinister Minister" K
#5April 2nd, 2006 · 01:10 PM
131 threads / 114 songs
295 posts
United Kingdom
Decent song, liking the switch at like 3.30, then when it kicks in at 4.07.. think the lead should be abit louder.. in a few places... im not gonna list all the seperate times... but sometimes it feels like it should be the focus of the song... should cut through the other parts seems quite subdued... but all in all a good tune
#6April 2nd, 2006 · 02:32 PM
42 threads / 1 songs
556 posts
United States of America
Iszil...I'd say it's pretty near perfect. It sounds really great!
#7April 3rd, 2006 · 09:14 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Thanks for comments.
Agree some but disagree others; anyway, that's your opinion, guys.
This is my style and won't change it, just improve.

         > Iszil
#8April 3rd, 2006 · 09:36 PM
8 threads / 8 songs
257 posts
Hai Iszel,..Ok this is your style but please try to make it less "potpouri"i think it will become better then!!But what is better?? OK
I mean:just a little bit less potpouri
Otherwise you will drown in your overload!
Anyway dude,... overload of talent you have got. compliments

#9April 5th, 2006 · 09:18 PM
20 threads / 18 songs
159 posts
United States of America
this is pretty rockin stuff man. Keep it up!
#10April 6th, 2006 · 05:15 AM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Pretty decent stuff again Iszil - ok, you can play guitar well and you have a good ear for blending styles.  Definitely feel the Dream Theater influence hear.
What stands out for me in this song are the truly awesome drums..... I know how you do them, I'm aware how time consuming it is to get decent sounds and loops using FL or Beatcraft, but Wow!!! You just do it sooooooo well.
How do you manage it?
Well done
#11April 6th, 2006 · 06:02 AM
29 threads / 14 songs
355 posts
You're gonna get real famous real soon if you stick to that style. However, I guess the guitar efects soung too digital to me. I you only could get a more analog sound of it, this would have been almost perfect.

To be honest with you I really feel, that if you came across someone who professionally helps vocalists develop their voice and singing skills, you'd be a fantastic singer. You are good, but you could be so much better. And that is a complement.

You are very talented !!!! Possibly, the best talent on here in the rock genre.

#12April 6th, 2006 · 04:12 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,802 posts
Perfect. But where's the BOOOOM?
#13April 6th, 2006 · 05:16 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Thanks to everybody for their nice comments.

TritonKeyboarder wrote…
Perfect. But where's the BOOOOM?

Sorry, TK, but for the boom I should upload another version of the song and that is too much, but if you are interested about getting the song with a Boom just tell me and I send it to you.

        > Iszil
#14April 8th, 2006 · 02:21 AM
14 threads / 10 songs
68 posts
I agree with volstupor, the problem with this kind of songs of yours is that I can't remember how they start when they end, I've hearded a couple of times, and I think that some parts would work better sepparetely, my favorite part starts at 4:25 and then the flut gets in and the song gets better, but when it becomes faster ... and the intro seems too long, I would put it away, but in that case the song would end up being two minutes long.
#15April 13th, 2006 · 04:55 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Micosis, I guess this is not a popular style, but there's people who like it, may be not in this site, but this a very popular rock variation.
Anyway, thanks for the advices and critiques.

         > Iszil
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