i really love this song...............

can i have another crack at it...............???

the fish

Seriously dude, be my guest!

Nice song Cluster...Enjoyed this one...


Flyer

better phrase would be, just tweaking in it..
I really think you have a good talent!! I
don't hear that much similar to Syd Barrett though..
but i.m.h.o. I hear Peter, Paul and Mary meets
the mama's and the Papa's; Head on!! those
styles are similar enough that a marriage between
the two would produce great things... again, i.m.h.o...
 you and I discussed a little of the semantics in
chat bro.. so I don't think there's any reasons to
rehash them.. the one I will recap is the key.. just
to me sounds a little low for your voice..

blessings,

Dan - Blueyes

Awesome. Love the chords and melody. I just think that root>3rd is one of the best chord progressions out there (it sounds rather sad, I think)

reminds me of Creep by Radiohead.

Nice recording
Love the vibe in this song and the melody is very cool indeed.I think i hear some notes not quite in the right pitch but hell this is awesome and it gets a really good vote from me.

I'm so happy people are checking this out again! And such nice things to say too

Very nice! I especially like the end.