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#1February 15th, 2006 · 04:22 PM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
Weight Of Wrong
*
Score: 91.9%
Rank: 1st
Battle: 2006-04


OK, This is the last one I'll put up for a while. I fear I'm pissing people off :P I'm gunna concentrate on commenting on more people's work. I've just been so busy.

VERSE 1

Oh shit,
Guess I got the wrong end of the stick,
I guess you thought your magic tricks would,
Fool me more than this.

But I thought you'd know,
I'm just too old for magic shows

CHORUS

Well I guess I'm gunna go,
I hope you hold onto your pride,
'Cause it won't be long,
'Till the weight of your wrong,
Leaves it the only thing in your life.

Well I know it hurts now baby,
But you just gotta let it slide.

VERSE 2

Oh fuck,
Seems you'ce really screwed things up,
Or didn't I squint hard enough,
To keep you in my view?

And you,
Flew.

Nevermind.

CHORUS

Well I guess I'm gunna go,
I hope you hold onto your pride,
'Cause it won't be long,
'Till the weight of your wrong,
Leaves it the only thing in your life.

Well I know it hurts now baby,
But you just gotta let it slide.

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#2February 15th, 2006 · 04:33 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
Chile
Oh, Shit!
Guess I love this song.
Come on man, just one bad song, please!
You are an incredible composer and what I liked more of this song were the expressions you used in your voice, which, for me, is the best here on BandAMP. The chords progression, as in all your songs, is really good, and in general all is awesome.
I'll buy your album when you release it. This is a great job.
Huge fan of yours.

      > Iszil
#3February 16th, 2006 · 06:34 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
327 posts
United Kingdom
you have a very sensual voice,i am liking this song....wow....
#4March 7th, 2006 · 02:45 PM
13 threads / 1 songs
408 posts
United States of America
Very nice style. The guitar strumming and picking pattern works really well together. And your voice, once again, is fabulous.
#5March 8th, 2006 · 12:26 PM
7 threads
104 posts
United Kingdom
100% from me - you have the art of expressing your song in your voice.

but yur gonna have to use "Dear Brit" and "Hey Chuck" in the radio edit 
#6March 9th, 2006 · 07:38 AM
12 threads / 9 songs
142 posts
United States of America
Yes. Oh, Shit.
Nice sound quality.
What's your recorder?
What was your mic?
Looking forward to new stuff on your new guitar.
#7March 9th, 2006 · 08:09 AM
37 threads / 25 songs
237 posts
United States of America
like all the rest of your work ..very impressive
 
#8March 9th, 2006 · 10:34 AM
13 threads / 13 songs
40 posts
United States of America
Very well done - it has real emotion, or at least a good imitation of it.
#9March 11th, 2006 · 01:11 PM
18 threads / 15 songs
147 posts
Italy
Great composition and tecnique.
The vocals are also great.
very well done!
#10March 11th, 2006 · 02:30 PM
4 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
Canada
Hats off to you!  This is definitely one of the best songs up here.  The guitar work is clean, the vocals are clear and tasteful... everything fits really nicely.  Rock!!

Marg
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#11March 11th, 2006 · 04:46 PM
9 threads / 4 songs
26 posts
Canada
Great stuff man, I love acoustic.  What kind of guitar  are you using?


http://www.marula.ca
#12March 11th, 2006 · 10:09 PM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
Hey, thanks

I'm using a pretty good Taylor 6 string acoustic. I had it shipped in from the states quite recently actually. It's really beautiful.

- Chester
#13April 2nd, 2006 · 05:11 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
12 posts
United States of America
great
I really like this song,the guitar reminds me of Henry Gross.Great job on the recording as well
#14April 3rd, 2006 · 03:03 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
interesting tune...

in fact, probably my favorite from you!

I read somewhere that you were creating a piano-based EP.. can't wait to hear it.

As for this song... well I already told you about it, some time before

so keep it up, and the best of luck to you!
#15April 4th, 2006 · 07:16 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Fabulous, yet again.
The recording quality both guitar and voice is great.  The playing's great, the singing's great.
Stunning - it just goes to show that with a good song, and some serious talent, all you need is a guitar and your voice to create art.

God that sounds a bit fanatical ........... but you get the drift!
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