The guitar was pretty, but this isn't really my type of music. If it was, I'd say it was good.
you new zealanders... always such the romantic... 
but this was nice as are all your songs i actully injoyed this very much kinda sorta put me in a mood to relaxe take a bubble bath put on some fuzzy slippers and a robe and kick back by a fireplace... as i ve said before you have great tallent! and i cant wait to hear your new stuff, this gets a very high vote from me
(just teasing about be a romantic, its actully sweet 
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but this was nice as are all your songs i actully injoyed this very much kinda sorta put me in a mood to relaxe take a bubble bath put on some fuzzy slippers and a robe and kick back by a fireplace... as i ve said before you have great tallent! and i cant wait to hear your new stuff, this gets a very high vote from me (just teasing about be a romantic, its actully sweet )the paper cut
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| Encore! |
Amazing. This is way too professionally done for me to critic on anything because to me it sounds like a song I'd hear on the radio! If one doesn't know... they shouldn't say it should be done this way, so i won't say anything but
Amazing
)Luke(
Amazing
)Luke(
| best song writing yet |
OK the guitars are flawlessly played and support the lead melody and the lead melody fits into the song perfectly. As far as hooks go that's "artistic choice" to me. This song doesn't need it. Much like classical music didn't do repetitive,some songs when written a certain way don't need to be all that repetitive. I think this song is one of the best I've heard and really puts out the emotion.
great song
loved it
loved it
Excellent! Very good production, balances are perfect, guitar sound is great, your voice works perfectly. Wonderful words.
Nice work!
Nice work!
| last scene of an episode... |
i like these kind of songs, just acoustic guitar and singing.
but the balance is disturbing: you should cut down some
volume from the vocals. nice song though, very o.c.
Like those songs always in the last scene of an episode,
where they show different characters all doing just great.
And then, slowly fading out to the ending titles.
but the balance is disturbing: you should cut down some
volume from the vocals. nice song though, very o.c.
Like those songs always in the last scene of an episode,
where they show different characters all doing just great.
And then, slowly fading out to the ending titles.
| A beautiful song |
What a truly beautiful song.
About this 'hook' thing.
A musical hook makes a song 'catchy'
as does a lyrical hook, one creates that 'sing along thing', but a lyrical hook if chosen well can also have that 'Chinese whispers' effect in that it can change meaning, relevant to the song or to the listener whether they understand the story within the song or not.
I fully understand that a song is personal but the reality is that you wouldn't make it a song if you didn't want more people to hear it, so logically if you want more people to hear it (listen to it) it must in some way be 'catchy'!
Its a catchy 22.
About this 'hook' thing.
A musical hook makes a song 'catchy'
as does a lyrical hook, one creates that 'sing along thing', but a lyrical hook if chosen well can also have that 'Chinese whispers' effect in that it can change meaning, relevant to the song or to the listener whether they understand the story within the song or not.
I fully understand that a song is personal but the reality is that you wouldn't make it a song if you didn't want more people to hear it, so logically if you want more people to hear it (listen to it) it must in some way be 'catchy'!
Its a catchy 22.
That's not true.... Lots of people write songs for other reasons other than to get recognition. I'm one of them.
- Chester
- Chester
| Fact from the hart |
I didn't say 'recognition', I said 'for more people to hear it'
If you make a song and don't share it with 'anybody', wouldn't you then not get the concept 'dose a tree make a sound when it falls if there's nobody there to hear it (bit of an egotistical proverb on the part of us humans to be honest with you, but never mind, you know what I mean!)
And if you don't share that song, couldn't you just as well stick to keeping a personal diary?
I respect your point of view and can picture a few situations where music is that personal, but I still feel that the element of 'sharing' is dormant from the beginning.
If you make a song and don't share it with 'anybody', wouldn't you then not get the concept 'dose a tree make a sound when it falls if there's nobody there to hear it (bit of an egotistical proverb on the part of us humans to be honest with you, but never mind, you know what I mean!)
And if you don't share that song, couldn't you just as well stick to keeping a personal diary?
I respect your point of view and can picture a few situations where music is that personal, but I still feel that the element of 'sharing' is dormant from the beginning.
I got the hook as being: It's only natural you should leave me
It's almost certain you'll stay
But if you leave me
Please just go; turn and move away
Turn and move away
It is repeated and I find that is the most memorable part anyways.
I don't personally believe a title has to be from the hook, or even for that matter....any part of the song whatsoever.
Anyways, like your stuff, thanks for posting(I know this is a year old post, but meh who cares?)
-Mark
It's almost certain you'll stay
But if you leave me
Please just go; turn and move away
Turn and move away
It is repeated and I find that is the most memorable part anyways.
I don't personally believe a title has to be from the hook, or even for that matter....any part of the song whatsoever.
Anyways, like your stuff, thanks for posting(I know this is a year old post, but meh who cares?)
-Mark
| seven |
Good vocals as usual man. Great picking on the steel strings. Depth in your words here too. What is that wild sound in the background? A chello? Cool...Have a great day man!...JGV
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