Hey there TLS!!!
Great to hear from you again! Does this mean that you will be hanging around here again now?

as much as i can, i'll try hanging around   i can't be very active though, b/c i'm stranded in the way of computers.  i'm having fun though   i'm trying to write in my blog every 2 weeks or so though.

as for the song..

vry niice.  the flow works out really well.  the music and the vocal tone are great together i think.  i think the solo part is fine, really.  any heavier on the music and i think that the vocal would get all thrown off.

brownies for everyone when i get back! 

Once again, collaboration works are working (lol) pretty well.
This a pretty good song; well constructed and and with a pretty good vocal work.
Keep this up guys.

     > Iszil

PS: The solo wasn't as bad as jkmodl said... worked fine for me.

Thanks!

I don't mind admitting that I'm not a lead player anyway - I much prefer the structure, melodies and riffs. I've tried writing solos before - it takes me ages and I'm never happy with the result. Probably because I don't have a clue what I'm doing - I should really study some sort of theory at some point.

I must say I've never have written a solo; just improvise. Also don't have studied anything of theory. The clue of the solos is just play, at least for me.
Keep this up man, and just try improvising solos.

     > Iszil

haha! I did improvise one up here on BandAmp and I personally laughed at how it turned out!

Listen to Duplicity...

And you can check out my last one Mental Trap.

      > Iszil

hecho (done)

it all has a nice flow nice rythum and overall good song

smooth,dreamy sensation.i particularly enjoyed the guitar solo.vocal style perfect for this song.

Thanks very much for the comments folks, but please don't forget to vote too if you have a moment!

Sounds great . Song has a nice flow, you really "stay" in the song

Collaboration strikes again ! Great result. I thought the guitar solo fitted into the song well - was that you or Jim ?

Hi there, that was actually me. JBP did the vocals, I did the rest.

Thanks!

great song...   som many have said so much already, that leavves me only this to say..
 
   Thank you
       
              JimK