should I make it longer??? make a long version of this song???

if you've got ideas to work with definately... like everyone else said, there is a great feel to this song, and it is played very expertly, even though it could stand to be re-recorded

I agree, it is played expertly... Esp. considering your playing a poor quality guitar... it is amazing.... with the right guitar, I think you could make this phenominal!!  And remember, this is YOUR song, there are no rules, you do what you feel.... And keep up the great work...
       Jim

guess for a new battle i'll make a new version, more profesional.

thanx for all support, ideas and feedback in general

I like it a lot, reminds me of summer holdiay somewhere where the colour grey doesn't exist.

nice relaxing tune very good keep it up

Its not about a low budget guitar in my opinion it sounds just great the way it is,..
Though the performence itself could be more improved:try to play it more releaxed
The moment when you hit the strings try to imagine a women (not to rough,..lol)