Hey Another Instrumental...
I worked pretty hard on it to get the distortion and stuff alrite as i didnt have recording studios that cud take care of this track....Aneways...i wrote lyrics for this song..and will be incorporating them soon..This song is basically bout a person's feelings after getting high/stoned...
As always..Comments and Suggestions are always welcome
Anybody is free to contribute to the track in terms of either bass or vocals...
Thanks
Be patient ...this is a long one..and hopefully wont leave you dissapointed..!!!

YAH

Fine work. stereo room is good for the guitars. Yes, needs a fat bass. Intro is thin. Hope someone or you by yourself complete the song.

I'm very interested in the lyrics. The music is good, although I think your guitars very dry sounding: very direct, no modulation or verb whatsoever, which doesn't add to the thickness of the overall sound. They are all mono sounding, with the raw distortion it causes the coloration of the sound to turn towards grey (not something I'd associate with being high or stoned!)

Am I hearing a whammy pedal? Kickass! Cool solo

You've got some nice ideas going there. I'd like to hear the lyrics! They could take the whole to a great diversity of directions.

I would give it more "Meat" by changing up your distortion from a buzzy sound to a Heavy sound with more bass in it.

There are some great ideas in here man! But far from finished. You know what, I almost wanna here a phat shred keyboard solo in there.. but thats just me. With lyrics things should fill out nicely. Keep working on it!

NICE, whammy pedal!

The other guys have pretty much said what i think when i hear the song. Needs more bass, and a some real drums would be nice. I don't know about you, but i can't stand drum machines, i like the real deal. Awesome shredding. Very atmospheric

Nice work, although, I see you only have one vote for the December battle. Well, I will add mine and hopefully someone will read this and want to add theirs.
Great job on the mix and panning effects, very cool.

Sounds good to me. You should probibly get some actual drums in he mix. . .  drums machines seem to take away the momentum to this song.

Also it wouldnt hurt to stretch out the song when you go to add vocals.

Sounds good to me. You should probibly get some actual drums in he mix. . .  drums machines seem to take away the momentum to this song.

Also it wouldnt hurt to stretch out the song when you go to add vocals.

i would change it to heavy instead of fuzzy.  liked it though!

Good ideas. Some decent hammer-ons at the end. I thought it needed tightening up a bit.
Pretty good work overall.

good song, missing the bass and too long tho

the solo first was a little repetitive, and it sounded out of place with little distortion... but adding a light echo effect without changing the gain would be fine. the song would work well with lyrics, can't wait to hear it!

also, the cymbal crashing was out of place, and could have been done without... the drums seemed fine except for the cymbal-- as you can tell, I don't know my set very well, wish I could give you more advice... although the kick you added around 3:30 worked okay...

the solos starting at 4:30 were pretty stinkin' cool though!! very well done... but of course must be condensed, or add the lyrics...

very good.

Lead needs to have heavier distortion for sure. Take out the crash at the beginning and I would keep the rhythm distortion the same throughout the song, though thats just me. Cool intro and a very good song in itself.