great voice,good lyrics and song structure/sounds like you recorded in a fifty gallon barrell,like the one i record in!!But unlike my guitar ,yours is in tune!!good job.

your song has potential...the music flow is good...had a hard time hearing your lyrics.....
but I got the concept of the song...its a nice song.....just needs some work....keep it going.......

Ralph

just for the record: I think that'd be D Bm G A  

nice song

i like the chorus

could be developed into a blockbuster

splash............go for it

i hadent listened to this song in a while and i was going threw all the votes ive done and i stumbled apon it again, i still really like this song

esay to listen to... really pleasant song. Too bad for the recording tho.

This is a good song , just needs a little work.  the singing is real good, the guitar kinda takes away just a little cause of the tuning thing , but not so much so that it ruins it.
good one.