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#1September 15th, 2005 · 03:34 AM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
One Fine Day
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Score: 59.1%
Rank: 11th
Battle: 2006-06


A happy go lucky song. The first one I ever wrote long time back, something like 5 years ago.

Lyrics:

Across the street I saw a girl,
She was walking away without a care in the world,
She called out to me can you help me please,
I have a thorn in paw I need to release.

I got to confess I hope to meet the girl of my dreams,
Across the street some day.

In a warm afternoon under hot sunshine
I could feel the sweat on her blurred outline,
She had a car which had broken down,
on the outskirts of an unknown town.

I got to confess I hope to meet the girl of my dreams,
Asking me for a lift in my car.

Inside the pub in the dim light,
I could see her face oh was it a sight,
With her blue eyes and her pretty black hair,
I could swear to god I could forever stare.

I got to confess I hope to meet the girl of my dreams,
In a pub having a drink.

Parties bands stocking and shoes,
Saturday nights and Monday blues,
It was she who said that we should leave the best,
Till the late hours of the night (till the late hours of the night)
I got to confess I hope tho meet the girl of my dreams,
I my dreams tonight (in my dreams tonight).

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#2September 15th, 2005 · 06:09 AM
2 threads / 2 songs
11 posts
Netherlands
Wow this sounds cool !

I'm not usually into this kind of music... but this is really good! Some drums may be nice though..
#3September 15th, 2005 · 11:03 AM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,086 posts
Netherlands
brings a    to my face!
#4September 15th, 2005 · 11:45 PM
31 threads / 5 songs
178 posts
Spain
A nice light song. I like the way the bass line steps around to compliment the guitar.
I think this would work well within a band.
#5October 4th, 2005 · 06:04 PM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
Interstingly while everyone likes the song the rating is a woeful 50%
#6October 4th, 2005 · 08:43 PM
full words
you cut off the end of some words...make the complete motion of the word with your mouth not just the general noise...the song would be better
#7October 5th, 2005 · 09:09 PM
13 threads / 1 songs
408 posts
United States of America
Rating
Hey Songwriter, it's my personal opinion that ratings should have more to do with quality and performance rather than "liking" a song. I can say I like a lot of songs on bandamp but I find them hard to listen to bc of quality of sound and an "off" performance. That being said, you've got a good song. There are a lot of songs on bandamp that I don't "like" but when quality and performance are great, I try to be as objective as possible bc it is their expression. And that is the whole gray area of art, right? Well, that's my philosophy on rating music here.
#8October 8th, 2005 · 04:38 AM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
hmmm.....
#9October 13th, 2005 · 05:17 PM
8 threads / 8 songs
17 posts
Canada
its good
it should be rated on how the song makes you feel, not on crummy quality etc etc. wahtever, i tihnk its a good song
#10October 14th, 2005 · 12:06 PM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
Thanks
#11October 19th, 2005 · 06:46 AM
21 threads / 21 songs
72 posts
Germany
Well Done
I have the same opinion than Creative.  I think most of the songs here are unique and weather you personally like it or not they have to be respected.
I think the main difference is the recording quality so it's the one thing you can judge objectivly.
Anyway I like your song, it has a chilling feeling. The recording quality is OK - but if you can improve it, the song would sound even more "professional".
Yes, I know it's a hard thing to do... I've recorded about 12 songs but the recording is still poor, so I won't bother you too much with my stupid little opinion ;-)
#12October 19th, 2005 · 04:44 PM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
Thanks for posting. Loved your comments. And I love one song of yours too.
#13October 20th, 2005 · 12:02 AM
2 threads / 2 songs
7 posts
Australia
nice song
nice lyrics, an overal good song
#14October 21st, 2005 · 02:21 PM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
Thank you
#15November 14th, 2005 · 07:31 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
106 posts
United States of America
Bad ratings Good song
hey songwriter,
The ratings are an overall rating, so if your recording quality isnt that good, members are gonna kill it. I do admit that it shouldnt matter, especially since we are all supposed to be amateurs here (except a few posing as) So maybe its time to beef up the equipment side, use some mixing software, record your songs on separate tracks, mix 'em up and put some time into producing the "package". You got the talent, now its time for some technology I guess.
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