or a bII7alt back to the one (i.e. c'mon; picky much FFG?)

Nice song, easy listening and multi-dimensional, keep it up.

Thanks for those comments guys. I have to say, I'm a little baffled by the music theory comments as I don't really know any formal theory - if I actually knew what I was doing it may have come out different (or may not even have come out at all!).

Lovely, really lovely.

Yup, that's a whole different type of music theory. Greatly misunderstood and deeply underappreciated by a lot (luckily not all!) of people who fare by the more conventional one! 

Me likes!

Your sense of harmony is fantastic. I'd like to hear something from you with bigger dynamic changes and more atmospheric elements. I don't mean that this song was lacking in those areas - I just mean that it would fit your sense of harmony. Try mymusicsource.com if you want to get producers to licence your stuff. This would be great for perhaps background music for a science program (except most of it is too high a quality for just background music - and stands alone as a piece you'd just want to listen to!) Very well done, thanks.

Oops! double post  sorry!

Thanks Maat! I havent been very active around here for a while now. May post some new recordings soon if I ever get around to finishing them... Thanks v much for the link too!