Hello!
First of all I want to sorry if I made mistakes, because I'm from Ukraine.
I want to ask you to do me a favour . My band have made a live video at the studio.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vn4PgdXxPiE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PgMUEvnB8H0
Could you please watch it and say few words about my English pronunciation?
Thank you.

To be honest I struggled for most of the song to make out the words, perhaps if the vox was brighter in the mix it may help. Other than that, pretty good song considering your ages

Ahh, the vox are brighter in this mix, but still struggle to understand some of the words, I think you need to exaggerate the sounds, open your mouth wider. Like it best when the drums come in, Ditch the keyboard drums if I were you.

Hmm, have you tried doing a live recording, think that would be great as you sound more like a live band rather than a studio one

Musically it's pretty good. I wouldn't call this rock, though. It's more like a sort of an eclectic pop.
About your english pronunciation, as Denis said, it was really hard to understand, specially in the first song. The second was better but still there were some words I had no idea what you were saying.
I suggest that if you are planning to reach high with your music then take some english pronunciation lessons.

           > Iszil

So are people from Ukraine prone to making mistakes ??  

Your pronunciation, accent and from what I can make out your choice of lyrics are remarkably good, if your looking for something then you could look at the 'clarity' and your 'articulation' of some lines.

I'd say keep up the campaign, get your music out there, these are really well produced songs and videos, you have the talent to create very popular songs....are you getting air play somewhere?

Love the very Cockney "You've got to move" !

thanks everybody!
I just never liked the way I pronounce choruses in the first song

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I could look at that video all day .........

That's actually quite appreciable music there. Should have been posted in the Video forum, though, but hey.

I wish you guys the best of luck with your band. That last um, "video", hehe, kind of reminds me of my own experience with the Ukraine, hehe.

a well.

cheers!