We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance

Putting our names together
Hoping to go on forever
The trigger;
nervous silence,
and secret letters
Your pretty car,
and journeys together
And the nocturnal artful dreams

We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance

I’ll be your words
You’ll be my music
Tinkling keys
and streaming poetry
And we’ll be a song

We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
I’m giving this to you
melody in silence
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance
We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance


(I haven't posted here in ages. Please help me... I'm trying to write this song... I've got the basic melody idea... and i want simple yet arresting lyrics... this is just the very rough idea... there is more writing to be done. it's a song for someone. about our friendship. Frankly, I have a fear of writing love songs. I'm serious. But I want to do this)

I suppose you really have to 'want to' write love songs before you can.
I like "We’re a beautiful, beautiful, luminance" , lyrically and vocally I think it has great possibilities.
Do you sing the words as you write ? I'm still trying to find a musical flow to your verses.
But if it's a Melody in Silence then it's a poem !