#1March 29th, 2008 · 10:06 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Birth
She holds her head up high
She looks me in the eye
And says 'I love you.....

I say why? What have I ever done to you
I haven't got a clue
I'm just laying here awake
You beat my heart
You make me shake

I build pyramids within my mind
Spend my life, buying time
In amids the mystic mime
The building bricks
I lay the rhyme

I build pyramids within my mind
I construct the keys that I find
In soft tones the gatherings defined
As all we'll ever see
As we're all forever blind

'I hate you' she says with a smile
How can this be?
This impossibility
This love as ice
Warm in the night
Close at hand
Like a distant light

In the middle of the night
I try to make it right
Try to write the rhyme
Say another line
But the sentence.....my love
Is until the end of time.
#2May 11th, 2008 · 11:50 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,805 posts
Puerto Rico
Very nice
RE:"I build pyramids within my mind
Spend my life, buying time
In amids the mystic mime
The building bricks
I lay the rhyme

I build pyramids within my mind
I construct the keys that I find
In soft tones the gatherings defined
As all we'll ever see
As we're all forever blind"


This two paragraphs are amazing kings..this is really awesome!!!
Just though id payed you a visit and to no surprise you had again another set of  great words!
M.
#3May 12th, 2008 · 09:49 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Pretty good Kings..I wish i would have wrote it myself....It does make a nice poem also...Not one time did you say the title of the song in the lyrics...Amazing

Flyer

Rates high
#4May 14th, 2008 · 10:05 PM
15 threads
63 posts
United States of America
KINGS a.k.a GOD
hahaha dude I agree with Marino!!! Those 2 paragraphs kick ass!!
Seriously... Did u just thought that sounded cool or is it a " true " metaphor?
  I decided to come back to the amp I missed the brotherhood and all the good times a great songs!!
This was a great way to kick off my time at the amp with a good ol' song from Kings!!
thanks Kings!!!  

P.S.- MARINO dude good to see you!!
#5May 15th, 2008 · 01:37 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Cheers
Hey Ninja, I was thinking about you only last week wondering where you were. So yes you've been missed and yes good to see you.

So you guys like my 'Birth'. Thanks.
It was quiet so I thought I'd post,  again it's a piece made up of pieces, and I wanted to be 'obscure', lol talk of the devil.....or is that God? 
#6May 15th, 2008 · 02:05 PM
15 threads
63 posts
United States of America
re: Cheers
kings wrote…
talk of the devil.....or is that God?  :evil:

   wow..... hmmm that gets me thinking...... NEW SONG?!?!?!?
#7May 15th, 2008 · 04:54 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Called "The Same Old Song Remains The Same Again For The First Time Like it Was Before"



 
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