wrote this with a friend 'bout something in a teen movie we saww. about how the guy feels bout the girl


Girl please don’t turn me down
You have turned my whole life around
Even though I made mistakes you were by my side

So now I ask you out
Want you to know what I’m all about
It’s you
I’m all for you
Yeah it’s true

So I’ll pick you up at 7.30
Will you wear that white dress that I love?
It makes you look so pretty
Like you’re an angle from above

The last time that we broke up
I really feared that I’d mucked it up
Because you wouldn’t talk to me at all
It was all my fault

So I’ll pick you up round 7.30
Will you wear that white dress that I love?
It makes you look so pretty
Like you’re an angle from above

But now i cant believe your talking to me
I'm so nervous
Nobody's ever had that affect on me
Because when i see you i cant breath
When i hear you my knees go weak
When i'm around you i cant speak
Nobody else has that affect on me

Hi Bee!
Talent must be inherent!
I would have thought you would have made more of the "It's all about you" bit, perfect subject!
Does sound very "teen movie".
I also like "So I’ll pick you up round 7.30" , it gives the whole thing a "real chilled-out" feeling!

So how much closer are you to putting these amazing pieces of yours to music? Or are you waiting till someone else likes them enough to do them for you ? 

well i dont really have the time right now to lay down a track.

i have a melody, but need to sit down with my guitar and put some chords to it then see how i like it.

nahh, i'm not gonna let someone else sing my song.

Nice song and really im going through that now im gonna ask some in advice in the pit l8r i think from more experienced minds but lol anyway what kinda voice are you looking for....  lol im always up for it!!! and i'll even lay you some bass!!! hahaha whatever drop me a pm if you want. I really like this song its cool and the line    "Because when i see you i cant breath
When i hear you my knees go weak"    I love it hahahaha its true!!! when i see her i cant breathe hahaha i almost sufficated the other night at the football game !!!!!!! lol anyway keep it up!!!