It’ll Never Happen If you’re Waiting For It - 31/01/08
Another one to collaborate on if anyone's interested?

Waiting for the girl to call   
Nothing better to do at all
Everything I’ve tried has failed
think I’m gonna take a fall

But it’ll never happen if you’re waiting for it
Never getting better if you’re waiting for it
Never gonna happen if you’re waiting for it.
So pick up the phone and call

Tried a million times to make it better
Wrote all the time I sent the girl a letter
Waiting for my reply
All I do is cry

But it’ll never happen if you’re waiting for it
Never getting better if you’re waiting for it
Never gonna happen if you’re waiting for it.
So pick up the phone and call

She was home last month
Never even saw her once
Something I must have done
Why was she on the run?

I should have treat her better when I had the chance
Should have picked her up took her the dance
I had a second chance
A great romance
I really messed it up

But it’ll never happen if you’re waiting for it
Never getting better if you’re waiting for it
Never gonna happen if you’re waiting for it.
So pick up the phone and call

Last night I got a call she’s with another guy
Treats her right not like my disguise
I was bad told her lots of lies
At least he really tries

It never happened, I was waiting for it
Never got better I wasn’t ready for it
It never happened  I couldn’t wait for it
I guess I’ll never call

You seriously dont mean what you sing I hope?
I'll do a collab with you :  I'll sit at home with HER and you can sing songs about how totally cool I am for having nicked her off you !!!! 

Ok storyline apart , really liked what I started reading , stumbled a bit at "Wrote all the time I sent the girl a letter", I cant make sense of it, read further still liking what I read, realised you have a few typos in there , excusable! , but then I really cant get over the last verse, why dont you just shoot yourself ?   JOKE!!! 
I do like the general format and I like the chorus a lot, just dont like where the 'guidance/light' of the song ended up!
Then again you might be the next Morrissey and might be very good at putting your fuck ups into songs!  

Not been too active on these forums for a while, but I really like the content of this.  Not sure how the rhythm of it would go, but ive never been one writing vocals to a song.  Would love to hear this!

don't mean what i write lol.

just had a bit of a tune running round my head and thought I'd try and put some words to it. would love someone to do some music for it.

Maybe the Morrissey mess ups might go ok lol