My first lyric. The original german lyric is written by me and a friend translate it.. I hope u like it ..

Now I’m lying here in my bed,
Thinking of u
And I imagine how it would be
U and me
If we would be together finally
If we would forget and everyone else

I know it won’t never happen
But I still believe… every single day

when I saw u yesterday, I noticed instantly again that u are the most beautiful girl
that could ever happen to me.
your eyes, your smile i love it
and i never wanna loose it.
i just hope u can return my feelings and give me ur heart.

I know it won’t never happen
But I still believe… every single day

please, o please give me a matutinal "hello"
if u wait for me to speak to u... NO
wont bring up my feelings
cuz if u dont do it,  ill probably go to grave
with my feelings i have for u
n i will still love u
u r an angel to me

I know it won’t never happen
But I still believe… every single day

Very good!  Not sure how it would translate to music just because i think the translation is a bit rough.  But im liking it.  Good show, keep it up!

Thank u MindsAtPlay! Perhaps i upload tomorrow the song. I dont imagine what u mean with rough. Can u explain to me pls?

by rough i mean, I dont think it translates perfectly from german to english...

like it!
I think if sung in German it would sound very nice!
Keep up the good job :]
Ich hoffe, dieses Lied sehr bald zu hören.
Haben einen netten Tag
Cheyenne

I think this song would appeal to a teenage auidiance.

Upload the song please.

Cheers

Denis

Thank u all for ur posts. Meowmachine.. I dont like german songs because i think english is the language .. In next week i record the song with my dad Tritonkeyboarder and upload it hear.. Hope u like it then ..

It's whatever you want to do Mr.Stif.
TK is your dad?!
Wow..tell him I said hi lol :]
Hope to hear it!and I'm sure it will be great.