ive been working on these for almost a weeekkkk gawd. any ways the insperation came when i was in my english class, and suposed to be writeing an essay or something.. any ways that the point. this girlwas wereing a t shirt that said, "i killed the prom queen" on it, and i just couldent get the line out of my head, so after a few bumpy rides and long hours staring blankly at stanzas that just wouldent work at all together i got this ^_^ i just finished it like two seconds ago and now im posting yes there may be spelling errors and grammer errors but igonore them, we all know my spelling sux ^_^;

ok so im back in school and ive got my cpu class again so when i get some time in it im going to put to gether a beat for it and add some vox, (im really movin on this one lol) because i like the song alot, (or at least the idea behind it) and every one thats seen it so far is in good shape about it. its suposed to be a pop rock, girl punk screaming meanie not bull crap flat out attitude song with chick vox, screaming drums the whole nine yards. basicly your averge teen age girl song (blehk) lol injoy

I KILLED THE PROM QUEEN
There she was looking oh so fine
batting her lashes and blowing kisses all the time
plastic smiles and rose red cheeks
then life hit her and she let out a shriek
   
I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
damn her tiara looks good on me
I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
the tragedy was all over NBC
I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen

She stood waving her manicured hand
fake little halo over her blond head
Drawn on red lips and fake orange tan
thinking that she was so divine

so I crushed her spine

Doctors came running screaming me oh my
how did that desk even get that high?
That’ll put a damper in her winning streak
She’ll definitely have to watch her physique

I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
damn her tiara looks good on me
i killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
the tragedy was all over NBC
I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen

Anger issues PAP I see!!
So do we get to hear you sing this to a kicking track!!!!!
I feel bad for the drama queen(LOL)!!

Nice job!!
Marino

LOL!  how satirical, PAP! I love it!  Hope to get to hear it someday!  You are very talented!

lol yeah man i cant wait to do this song ^_^

I still love this song!!!!

There she was looking oh so fine
batting her lashes and blowing kisses all the time
plastic smiles and rose red cheeks
then life hit her and she let out a shriek
   
I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
damn her tiara looks good on me
I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
the tragedy was all over NBC
I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
And the king finally noticed me

She stood waving her manicured hand
fake halo on her little blond head
Drawn on red lips and a fake tan
I tell you I can’t stand it
That’s when the desk landed

Doctors came running screaming me oh my
how did that desk even get that high?
That’ll put a damper in her winning streak
Now she’ll have to watch her physique

I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
damn her tiara looks good on me
i killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
the tragedy was all over NBC
I killed the prom queen
I killed the prom queen
And the king finally noticed me

YEah, the small changes in version two make it flow a bit more to the punk rock music I am hearing in my head... Perhaps soon we will hear this.... I think Basketcase would be good for coming up with some jam for this peanutbutter goodness...  Oh, and Marino with a touch of shredded wheat wholesome solos.. And, a touch of Goatcheese backing up the vocal arrangement.... hmmm.. tasty..

            JimK

haha intenseee

do you have a music for this???? would sound great in a "green day" manner

awww thanks guys
and nooo i dont have music JUST yeat
but im working on it ^_______________________^:::

Where the H*ll are you?!  I got that little something something ready for you and now you're a no show too. (yeah im talking about you, Meow)  Get your little hinny on her so I can send it to you.  Also how are we gonna write a song together if you arent around!

Man PAP again you amaze me!!!!!
This reminds me of a cross between
Paramores- Missery Buisness and
Murder Dolls- Kill Miss America
very NICE!!!! lol this being
the first thing I read on bandamp
after being gone for a while!!!!
is very incuraging in a physco
kinda way!!! lol no jk
its very cool I like I can see a
kicking tune for it!!!!!

thanks for the reiews boys, loved the feed back ^__^
MAP i need u to come up a track for this
lmao

hmmm mapppp i need u to like.. i donno.. make a beat for this?? lmao

Yeah girl, we're gonna do it, no worries.  Ive got to talk to you some more about the concept.  Sorry, its been hit and miss with us lately....  But the weekend is here again so I should have a little time.  ill be looking for you!