A few of the lines in the middle of the song I feel were forced--and I was trying to come up with a few replacements, but could not--any ideas? I'll mark the lines with a *. And just for reference, here is the recorded song--http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5149.html

Thanks!



Used to be so alone

Didn't know which way was home

Always knew I had faith in side

But never knew the day I couldn't hide



'Cus in the land of golden dreams

Things aren't always the way they seem

We live our life for our gain

Never letting anyone-in our lane

In the land of golden dreams



Whether it rains or snows

There are highs and lows

Things aren't always meant to be

Can't be completely free

But we can try

Some will live and some will die


'Cus in the land of golden dreams

Things aren't always the way they seem

We live our life for our gain

Never letting anyone in our lane

In the land of golden dreams


Heading out to the day

Maybe to change our ways

But always knowing--the sun is showing bright

'Cus in the land of golden dreams

Things aren't always the way they seem

We live our life for our gain

Never letting anyone-in our lane

In the land of golden dreams

In the land of golden dreams

i don't see any asterisks... maybe the sight doesn't allow them. otherwise it is pretty good