alright, on of my good friends wrote this so tell us what you think.

I, look into the sky
and i have to ask why
you'd go and leave me
oh why, do feeling's have to die?
is it all just a sign?
of what is meant to be

well i'm just to exited
the end of this can be sited
she's over due for a brake out
i better go she blows my brains out
silence is a scary sound

funny feeling happened today
somewhere burried in the past
didnt mean much, that much anyway
i know that love will never last

i'm, torn up inside
there's a hole in my mind
when you're not next to me
so i, hope you choke and, die
on every single lie
look what you've done to me

well i'm just to exited
the end of this can be sited
she's over due for a break out
i better go she blows my brains out
silence is a scary sound

funny feeling happened today
somewhere burried in the past
didnt mean much, that much anyway
i know that love will never last

well I’m just too excited
the end of this can be sighted
she's over due for a break out
i better go she blows my brains out
silence is a scary sound

funny feeling happened today
somewhere buried in the past
didn't mean much. that much anyway
iknow that love will never last
funny feeling happened today
somewhere buried in the past
didn't mean much. that much anyway
i know my love will never last

Cool! At least it's not about how fucked up your friends are, this one seams to be doing alright for himself.
I can imagine this being a a good song, it's simple, a bit clever and it flows quite well , my only problem is with the fact that the second half is but a repeat of the first.

are you talking about dougie p? if so then that isnt a true story. nahh...it was a song about a story that i read earlier that day about a boy, and he finds out that his girlfriend was cheating on him with his best friend. so he becomes depressed, and starts to think that he's never going to be good enough and slits his wrist ect. but it's a good ending.

I loved this
I can only imagine it in song form!

Keep up the good work