i wrote this in stream of consciousness style
and i put some wierd acoustic guitar bits to it
comments?


Darling Nightmare
I’ve been sitting here for hours
You have not come to collect your flowers
Darling nightmare
You are the bane of my existence
And I have no resistance
But I, yet I, despise you

She says she kinda religious
Well I always thought it was a two way street

Darling nightmare
You are the bane of my existence
And I have no resistance
But I despise you

I don’t, I don’t, I don’t, I don’t, I don’t admire you
In fact I don’t despise you
It’s quite the opposite
By your ways I'm smit, I really must admit
I hear there’s a remedy
Being manufactured overseas
In Italy of Austria sounds nice
But Barcelona takes the spice
Its nice, the sugar and the spice and the sugar and the spice

Darling nightmare
You are the bane of my existence
And I have no resistance
But I despise you

In my time I have been muddled
In my time I have been fuddled
I’ve muddled and fuddled
Muddled and fuddled and muddled and fuddled and oh
But here ill go to extremes
It might become my undying theme

Darling nightmare
You dance and you twist
You are the reason I exist
You torture me so
How badly you do not know
You should go downstairs
But no you’ll sit there
And take up my chair
Darling nightmare

Darling nightmare
You are the bane of my existence
And I have no resistance
But I, oh I, despise you, you, oh

hey what about the guitar?
record it and upload it the amp.
would be great