The title is just a temp. I want to find a better name for the song...I haven't actually finished this song, but please tell me what you think so far:D

Oh no, it's happening again
I can't take, this pain again
I don't want to fit in with them
I don't want to belong

Am I too far away to come back?
Am I hear to stay forever?
If I'm too far away to come back
I think I'll have to stay forever

(Chorus)
I didn't ask for it to be this way
And now you're watching as my life slips away
And I can't do anything
But sit here quietly as you laugh at me.

Waiting, watching !
The way it seams to be going "Drowning in a dream" could be a good title.

Sounds like your talking about death or the maybe the reaper ,not sure but obviously dark and painful in feel.A little to short for me to give any real feedback but its flowing properly.PM when you finish it I get distracted sometimes and might forget to visit here and the repost might get lost in the other pages.Ill make sure I read it and give you a better view of what I think when you complete it!!!

I don't know if this has to do with death as Marino stated, but more like death of self.  As in how one loses oneself to conform or attempt to conform with society. I like it!  I think this can evolve further Keep Going!


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