so this is the revised version of music notes kill the song bird
still dont know what i was getting at with these lol, so apply them to what ever you like
eh took out a chorus and verse i didnt like so much changed the chorus a tad ad a few other things
let me know what you think



Music notes killed the song bird

(verse 1)
Glace in the mirror as I pass by
I look the same every time
But there’s so many secrets left uncovered
And so many songs left undiscovered

(verse 2)
Take a ride on a magic music note
Just like a dream I thought I found it
Dressed in blue jeans and long black coat
Turns out it was a songbird with no song
The notes were sour and melody’s all wrong

(chorus)
Take a ride on the melodies
Made of you and me
Flying so high
You think you can’t fall down
Sing your heart out only to find
You can’t make a sound

(verse 3)
Thought music was the perfect drug
Thought it flowing threw my veins
Would be better than forbidden love
Never thought I’d find a song bird
 in blue jeans and long black coat
who would make me float

(Bridge)
So what am i?
Who am i?
So what am i?
Who am i?

Bound to music notes
Or bound to you
In love with fame
Or in love with you
Don’t want to be tame
But I need to be with you
Some one should have told me
That melodies get sour
By every retched hour

(chorus)
Take a ride on the melodies
Made of you and me
Flying so high
You think you can’t fall down
Sing your heart out only to find
You can’t make a sound

Nice and dark!!!!!

Take a ride on the melodies------
Made of you and me               ---------
Flying so high                                     ------------------>Awesome

You think you can’t fall down    _
Sing your heart out only to find_____________>Sad
You can’t make a sound______

Good job Pap!!!!!!!

thank u
sadly lol, i made a song about music killing a song bird after i made this song and named it lol
 
go figure 

absolutely brilliant!!!!

good job. i like the blue jeans and long black coat.