#1January 4th, 2008 · 01:16 AM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
these dirty little secrtits of mine, who knew?
i know!!!!!!!!!!! ive been neglecting the amp and im sorry, ive been completly blocked artisticly sooooo heres the apoligy lol its rough around the edges something i came up with on the spur of the moment, if any one has any sugustians let me know, i pictured this as a piano peice with a female voice similer to pink or averil when sung slowly, the bridge picks up and gets faster twords the end, only to slow back down to the origanal slow moody pace of the first verse. umm so yeah i think thats it injoy and rip it to shreds.... nicley lol my ego is fragile

these dirty little secrtits of mine, who knew?
(aka snuffed out)

(v1)
These dirty little secrets of mine
Are killing me every time
Im drowning in them and I donít know
How I got here
To this place where everything I do is a mistake
Everything I touch turns to dust
And my heart just turns to rust

(chorus 1)
And in the end
Im nothing but a drowning child
With a sinking heart
Another reject to add to the pile
And these dirty little secrets of mine
Keep spinning and spinning
Im Turning on the inside
And every night I sit up and cry
Because of these dirty little secrets of mine
(bridge)
Who knew that I could cause so much damage?
Who knew that I couldnít manage?
Being on my own in a dark place all alone
With the whispering voices of the past
Screaming in my ear
and all the little secrits tearing at my insides
While the light of my candle burns bright
And then simmers to nothing again

(chorus 2)
And in the end
Everything I touch turns to dust
And in the end
Im nothing but a drowning child
With a sinking heart
Another reject to add to the pile
And these dirty little secrets of mine
Keep spinning and spinning
Im Turning on the inside
And every night I sit up and cry
Because of these dirty little secrets of mine
#2January 5th, 2008 · 11:25 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,358 posts
United Kingdom
I'm not one to critique lyrics, but your recent pick is very cool. ROCK CHICK
Cheers

Denis
#3January 6th, 2008 · 08:10 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,805 posts
Puerto Rico
Hey Paps i think this is one of your more solid lyrics yet.I'm way impressed how it came together with the main secrits theme.Good job indeed!
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