um this song is the first song ive ever recorded
there is a audio of it up soon
love to hear your thoughts


Melanoma

Hang up
Let the phone fall from your grasp
Let go
Undo all that’s left to be
Wake up
Never go, back to where you where
For there the past is meant to live

Come in, sit yourself down
We’ll tailor to your style
And you can hire elegance for a while
Two quid for half a day
A price flattering quietly
With a range learnt step by step

Melanoma
It’s under your skin now
Melanoma
It’s eating you up now
Run away, run away
Melanoma

Remember, you once meant little to someone
Fortune it can vary
Like the changing in the wind
A narcissist, a merchant travelled along one day
You’re just seen a gentle warrior
Look, life is back for vengeance
Back to bite your heels
Race home in vehicle
Given to you
By the wings of an eagle

Melanoma
It’s under your skin now
Melanoma
It’s eating you up now
Run away, run away
Melanoma

Melanoma
Under your skin
Melanoma
It’s under your skin now
It’s eating you up now
Melanoma

Is a curios mix of styles you have going here.I get the Symbolic usage on some phrases and find the you definitely know witting.Just wondering if for these writing the lighter side of symbolism should be used or the darker might be more appropriate.
Example:
1-A narcissist, a merchant traveled along one day
 You’re just seen a gentle warrior
 Look, life is back for vengeance

      Darker(In balance with the topic)

2-Given to you
 By the wings of an eagle
  
       Lighter(Represents freedom,breath)Not sure if it fits the context of the paragraph.

Other than that would love to hear the song for it ,I might be a whole different thing when played and the vocal dynamics might also ad the ingredient to tie it all together.

Knock Knock ! Any body home ?

Like your song.........................

You there ?

cool thanks for your thoughts

i dont really have any justification for 'wings of an eagle'
it just sounded right
but i tried to sing it in a negitive way i spose

i would like to put the audio up but i have no idea how to
haha

oh well thanks again

Can we help you with the audio Issue????I'll be leaving town for a few weeks but I'm sure if you post about what your needs are others can point you on the right direction!!
If what you have is a Cd recording try downloading a free Cd reaperhttp://www.mgshareware.com/frmmain.shtml
and for recording life and or from other sound devices you can use this recording programhttp://audacity.sourceforge.net
hope this helps any questions ask!!!!

A !
Like your song a lot, well I like the lyric a lot I'm yet to hear the song of the lyric!
So in what format is the recording? On CD, MP3, wav etc ? Or is it that you don't know how to post your MP3 on to bandAmp?
Just ask , anybody here can and will give you an answer! Though it is on the quiet side in the old vaults these days, someone is bound to wander in ! lol

O! Marino, welcome to the lyric review : CD reaper and recording life !!!LOL (You must have been in a hurry)