more towards poetry than song, and still raw... feel free to give comments/suggestions

Dear Friend,

This is a blank page and I’m filling it up with my words
I doubt they mean a thing, I bet they’re worth nothing
Cuz I cant think of anything.
I was going to write letter, a letter just for you
But I was afraid of sounding like a fool
Because I was hoping to…
Say something but I can’t right now
Cuz I just don’t know how…

How do I say I’m sorry?
How do I say I miss you?
How do I say that it’s okay to be afraid, Cuz I am too?
How do I say all this to you?

Dear Friend,

This isn’t a blank page cuz I’ve written down some of my words
I don’t know where this is going, I bet it’s confusing
Cuz I don’t know what I’m saying.
I was going to make it better, better for us two
But I was afraid of what we’ve turned into
Because I was hoping to…
Fix something but I can’t right now
Cuz I just don’t know how…

How do I fix a life?
How do I fix this misuse?
How do I fix a broken state of mind, cuz I have one too?
How do I fix me and you?

Dear Friend,

This isn’t the end.

huuuu

anyone?

Nice !!!!
This is in my opinion a song it has verse and chorus structure.The wording fits nicely in here.This on is real good maybe touch up on flashbacks of what happened.Why are you sorry??etc.....

the flashbacks sound like a good idea, although i'm not quite sure i want to add that much more cuz i tend to lose momentum when i write long lyrics. i was just trying to make it shorter, like a real note i would send because only the person will know what i'm talking about. i guess to make it more universal. i dunno.

but i might consider it.

thanks.