#1June 23rd, 2007 · 02:11 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
Dear Friend
more towards poetry than song, and still raw... feel free to give comments/suggestions

Dear Friend,

This is a blank page and Iím filling it up with my words
I doubt they mean a thing, I bet theyíre worth nothing
Cuz I cant think of anything.
I was going to write letter, a letter just for you
But I was afraid of sounding like a fool
Because I was hoping toÖ
Say something but I canít right now
Cuz I just donít know howÖ

How do I say Iím sorry?
How do I say I miss you?
How do I say that itís okay to be afraid, Cuz I am too?
How do I say all this to you?

Dear Friend,

This isnít a blank page cuz Iíve written down some of my words
I donít know where this is going, I bet itís confusing
Cuz I donít know what Iím saying.
I was going to make it better, better for us two
But I was afraid of what weíve turned into
Because I was hoping toÖ
Fix something but I canít right now
Cuz I just donít know howÖ

How do I fix a life?
How do I fix this misuse?
How do I fix a broken state of mind, cuz I have one too?
How do I fix me and you?

Dear Friend,

This isnít the end.
#2July 2nd, 2007 · 08:33 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
huuuu
#3July 2nd, 2007 · 08:33 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
anyone?
#4July 3rd, 2007 · 11:04 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Nice !!!!
This is in my opinion a song it has verse and chorus structure.The wording fits nicely in here.This on is real good maybe touch up on flashbacks of what happened.Why are you sorry??etc.....
#5July 4th, 2007 · 02:12 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
thanks!
the flashbacks sound like a good idea, although i'm not quite sure i want to add that much more cuz i tend to lose momentum when i write long lyrics. i was just trying to make it shorter, like a real note i would send because only the person will know what i'm talking about. i guess to make it more universal. i dunno.

but i might consider it.

thanks.
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