#1June 17th, 2007 · 02:43 PM
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76 posts
United States of America
Lost All Memory (I feel fine)
Here are the lyrics of a new song Marino and I just wrote. He should be posting pretty soon Keep in mind the refrain is sang in a "happy" way for maximum effect (hee hee!).


Lost All Memory (I feel fine)

I don't remember where I've seen you,
I can't recall where we have met.
You claim there's someway that I know you.
I must apologize, for I forget.

I can't remember if I loved you,
I don't recall a sense of pain.
No message saved upon my phone,
No souvenirs are in my home,
No underlying,
sense of shame.

Refrain:

I'm feeling very fine,
I've lost all memory of you.
Some people say that I've
lost my mind.
I feel exceptional, now,
I've lost all memory of you.
Insanity is kind,
I feel fine.

Bridge:

Of course you'd want me to remember,
That I should suffer by your hand.
And God forbid that I be happy,
That never was part of your plan.


I'm feeling very fine,
I've lost all memory of you.
Some people say that I've
lost my mind.
I feel exceptional, now,
I've lost all memory of you.
Insanity is kind,
I feel fine.
(X2)
#2June 17th, 2007 · 02:56 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
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Cymru (Wales)
You write beautifully, I really like the verse before the refrain, a very wide array of senses expressed and to the same point.
The 'story' took a turn that I did not expect but then you are 'Vicious Kitty'! lol
Cant wait till it's up!
#3June 18th, 2007 · 07:53 AM
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2,296 posts
United States of America
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Very Nice
Good work

Flyer
#4June 24th, 2007 · 12:06 AM
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76 posts
United States of America
Thank you guys so much!


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