Just thought I'd throw this in among the pigeons!!!
Tell me now or forever hold thy peace! 

How can I tell her what it feels like, what it feel like
When it feels like this
How can I tell that it's all that I know, this all that I know
When she wont let it go

How can I tell her that I love her, how I love her
When she'll just use it to brake my heart
How can I tell her that I need her, yes I need her
When she'll just laugh out in my face

How can I tell her that she's everything, everything
When she always gets up and walks out on me
How can I say that it's all over, is it all over
When it's all yet to begin

How can I hold her, like a fire, like a fire
When I know that she will burn
How can I tell her what I wouldn't do, all the things I wouldn't do
To be true to you......

How can I tell her she means everything, means everything, to me.....
How can I tell her she means everything, means everything, to me.....
How can I tell her she means everything, means everything, to me.....

ok well the first thing i see is the
repeating in the verses and the chorus
umm is that gonna be sung by you or
like a background type deal???

Passionate, kings.  I particularly like "How can I hold her, like a fire, like a fire, When I know that she will burn"

Looking forward to hearing you do this piece--I think it should suit your musical style and vocals.

Thank you both for comments.

SS : Right the repeating of the last bit of the line; it's not in the original lyric but after hearing the track it is meant for I added them all to make it fit better, though they could come out again, we'll see! It sounded good the first time round, pushing out and holding those last bits.

Avi  : Nothing like a bit of passion you know !!
Puts hairs on your chest! 
I really hope it suits my musical style and vocals, I wrote it !  lol

You could translate it into Spanish and ask dodosito to sing it !!??