I’ll be your peter pan if you’ll be my Wendy
I’ll take you to never land
If you’ll tell me stories
And hold my hand
I just wanna be your peter pan

I came flying into your life
And I flew right back out
Best of friends we became
Friends I didn’t want to stay
Wendy fell in love with captain hook
Paid me no heed after that
I don’t think I like this story book

Not every fairy tale has a happy ending
Peter pan had to go back to never land
And now Wendy’s chasing after the hook
That stole the heart that should have been mine
Every body wants Wendy, but they’ll have to get in line
Oh Wendy wont you please be my valentine

I’ll be your peter pan if you’ll be my Wendy
Ill take you to never land
If you’ll tell me stories
And hold my hand
I just wanna be your peter pan

Wendy doesn’t know
Wendy doesn’t care
This is how I feel
I just don’t compare
To that right hook
Of a looker
I’ll just drown in despair
Break my heart in two
So I can’t float in the air
Take me back to never land
Were I can say

I’ll be your peter pan if you’ll be my Wendy
I’ll take you to never land
If you’ll tell me stories
And hold my hand
I just wanna be your peter pan

You need to record this!  I really like your style!  I love songs that tell a story. you are a real talent.  Dont stop here, Get some more stuff out to us! PLEASE!

lol will do

I really like it--I'm very interested to see what it would sound like recorded--good work!

Great story LPD!  Really excellent and original. I also would be very interested to see how you put this to music and what genre or sound you would incorporate it into.  So do it!!!!

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