#1June 1st, 2007 · 11:06 PM
26 threads
24 posts
United States of America
Anorexia Nervosa
I wrote this one in about ten minutes. It has piano and gitair put to it, still having problems recording. working on it.

If you didn't mean it
Why'd you say it
And if you didn't want to hurt me
Why'd you drag it out

CHORUS
Little things like that
Get into my head and
Don't come out
I heard you the first time
You didn't stop
Now my mind will never be at ease
You've given me a desease

If you really loved me
You wouldn't have said anything
But since you said it
You can watch me fade
It's all your fault
You should be ashamed
You were always the one
To start to complain

CHORUS
Little things like that
Get into my head and
Don't come out
I heard you the first time
You didn't stop
Now my mind will never be at ease
You've given me a desease

Yeah, ever time I would tell myself
That you were wrong
Your voice would appear
over and over again
Tell me now how it sounds
When I say
The hunger pains will soon be ending now
#2June 2nd, 2007 · 03:55 PM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
I'm not a huge fan of the second verse--the double-backing over the lyrics makes me cringe in the way the ridiculous lyrics to "Breakfast at Tiffany's" makes me cringe.

You know..."And I said, what about, breakfast at tiffany's, she said, i think, I remember that film, and, as I recall, I think, we both kind of liked it, and I said, well, that's one thing we've got."

Rest of it seems interesting--what kind of mood is the music going to be?  Piano and guitar sounds interesting.
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