#1May 30th, 2007 · 12:17 AM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
Dramatic Action
What are you looking at
Dressed like that you look like a little brat
To fit into those designer jeans you cant have any body fat
Kicked me out of the booth where me and my friends sat

Chorus

You go out to resturants and cause a distraction
You cant seem to shut your mouth
always causing bad action
Backstabing a friend of yours till word gets out, to your satisfaction
You and your stupid dramatic action

Now you're hanging with the prat pack
wearing stupid fitted designer caps
Giving all your ugly glares
To people who stop and stare

Chorus

You go out to resturants and cause a distraction
You cant seem to shut your mouth
always causing bad action
Backstabing a friend of yours till word gets out, to your satisfaction
You and your stupid dramatic action

Jumping up on the tables
What, you think that people dont give you bad labels?
It causes huge tabloid sales

Chorus

You go out to resturants and cause a distraction
You cant seem to shut your mouth
Always causing bad action
Backstabing a friend of yours till word gets out, to your satisfaction
You and your stupid dramatic action
You and your stupid dramatic action
#2May 30th, 2007 · 10:45 AM
50 threads
259 posts
United States of America
good..
I like the chorus you pretty much described
all of the preps at my school and town
so amen!!! but I think this song could
be better if you changed the first verse,
 the same ryhme all the way through makes
it seem kinda redundit. maybe change the first
two lines to something like
                       "who do you think you are
                     for you to push me oh so far"
or sumtin like that.... its a good song i
really cant wait for more...
oh yea and by the way songs dont neceeserilly
have to ryhme I mean for the most part they do
but just not every line.
                                Music Is Life,
                                        SS
#3June 1st, 2007 · 07:25 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
that's a pretty good lyrical suggestion. but where would it go. i dunno tho cuz i kind of like how it is right now.
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