#1May 27th, 2007 · 07:39 PM
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K, in the HELP!!! thing I had a song called Hello. This is still not perfect but it is a work in progress.

I think I know you
Do  you think
I could show you
Who you used to be
What you used to do
What you loved about me
What I loved about you

I reconize you
Do you know
What you used to do
To be, totally free
It involved me
And your cadillac
How we drove to fast

We were gonna runaway
Do you remember
Or did I fade away
Did you think
I wasn't serious
I was packed
And ready to go
Oh oh

We were gonna fly away
We were gonna make a change
We weren't gonna let them choose our paths
We were gonna stay in love
Till the day we died and flew to above
But something happened to you

So now you trying to apolizige
Saying it wasn't true so I guess  you lied
I spent my friggin life just waiting for you
Now you think that you can wave it by
And put me back in your f---ing life
I guess you never understood

I don't reconize you
Do you know
How I used to love you
we were totally free
But you left without me
#2May 31st, 2007 · 11:16 PM
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hey i saw this and I thought
It would be cool if you ended
the song with sumtin like

                     "so I guess its time
                       we both said goodbye"

thats just a suggestion but it would be cool!!!!
#3June 1st, 2007 · 10:53 PM
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I like, thanks for the suggestion... this song was really hard for me to write. I was like... blank.
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