Ok guys this is a song dedicated
to the troops in... EVERYWHERE!!!
they serve our country well...
and this is my way of saying thanks
I guess...so If any of you guys
are involved with armed forces...
here you go...



Cheating Death

VERSE:
he laughs and looks you in the eye
you grab a gun and begin to cry
everything seems too surreal
as the blood of life begins to spill
your time here flashes before your eyes
you look on as fire fills the skies

CHORUS:
cheating death is like a game
except now you feel the pain
and everyone sees your heart is torn
but from your pain only sorrow is born
cheating death is like a game
except now you feel the pain
and everyone sees your heart is torn
but from your pain only sorrow is born

VERSE:
you the battle's end, but the war wages on
and you find everyone left you know there gone
your the only one inside these dirty walls
and your a sitting duck for the fire that falls
but still you get up, and fight through the night
until victory, you grasp and hold tight

CHORUS:
cheating death is like a game
except now you feel the pain
and everyone sees your heart is torn
but from your pain only sorrow is born
cheating death is like a game
except now you feel the pain
and everyone sees your heart is torn
but from your pain..
FROM YOU PAIN...

I like it so far.. can't wait to see
how the collaboration goes...
 Nobility also adds to it ya know..
I think dedicating it to the troops
is very kewl.. very noble!!


Bluey - Danny

I'm changing the first to lines
from

           "he laughs and looks you in the eye
          you grab a gun a begin to cry"
to
           "look at the world through his eyes
          you grab a gun as the eagle flies"

what do you guys think is this better or what?

wow when I wrote this I didnt know
that memorial day was comming up...
thats cool how things work out well..
I up here in good ol' nashville tennessee
I love it here it might just inspire me to
write a country song........ YEA RIGHT!!!
but anyway I was just gonna drop by
here to see if anybody posted....
I guess not so........... thanks blu for
posting I like the feedback.....
and support the troops you guys!!!
wether you like it or not they are up
there to stay so do all you can to help
em out!!

Hey, why is nobody posting here?? 
I like these lyrics better than the first ones you wrote.. This is gonna be an awesome rockin' collab!!! 

thanks I like these better also.
yea I really hope we (as my dad put it)
"nip it in the bud" and get a hit
I cant wait to finish this!!!!!!!