#1May 19th, 2007 · 05:30 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
king of perfect
wrote this in about five minuts mind you im to lazy to check for gramicle arrers write now and im sure i spelt some stuff wrong. so here it is any way. i donno i guess im bored lol sorry for the sappyness this is suposed to be a country song based tune. though im not sure now. but it is ment to be slow. and i havent really read threw it or made changes so its a rugh draft i guess you could say.. so bare with me please.

king of perfect

He’s the boy
That every one wants to be
Tall and lean
Funny and never mean
He’s everything to every one
I wonder If he knows
He’s all I think about at night
that his face is the only one I see
When I turn out the lights

He’s the boy from a big old city
The kind that stand out
The one that don’t need your pity
Every ones in love
With the boy
That’s stolen my heart
Oh no now im fallen apart

He’s got an angel on his arm
Doesn’t he know this isn’t fair?
He smiles and grins at her
He doesn’t know and doesn’t care
That my hearts in his hands
They walk by and all I can do is stare

Why can’t that be me?
She’s the kind of perfect I whish I could be
He’s the sun and she’s the moon
She makes him laugh
Like I can’t do
Im happy he’s found some one
But I wish I could be that some one
He’s the king of wonder
The one who’s stolen all my thunder
Boys aren’t supposed to be so perfect
But this one seems correct

He’s the king of lightning
The one who’s oh so freighting
Boys aren’t supposed to reflect
Everything you’d respect

Fake a smile so no one can see
The pain the perfect boy causes me
His little angel stays on his arm
He’s fine with it he’s in love with her charm
I wish he would look at me
Instead of right past me

But I’ll put my heart in my back pocket
Save it for a rainy day
Tired of keeping it in an electric socket.

He’s the king of wonder
The one who’s stolen all my thunder
Boys aren’t supposed to be so perfect
But this one seems correct

He’s the king of lightning
The one who’s oh so freighting
Boys aren’t supposed to reflect
Everything you’d respect


He’s some kind of perfect
This doesn’t mean a thing
But how can I forget
Every little sting?
When he walks by me
I cant breath
There they go
So perfectly
Why can that be me?
#2May 19th, 2007 · 06:09 PM
37 threads / 19 songs
618 posts
United States of America
lol
I tried to teach my kids a very important
lesson from the time they were old enough
to understand..
 "Do you know what them knot headed
boys are good for???   To get you little
knot headed girls in trouble.." would
tell my daughter.. then would tell my
son "do you know what them lil knot
headed girls are good for?? To get you
lil knot headed boys in trouble!! " lolol

Girl I like this.. it's kewl.. but I'm just
a little slow imagining what the tune
is exactly? I can get the flow and meter
of the lyric.. just without key and a
hint of the melody line, it kinda is
escaping me right now.. but doesn't
matter, it's still kewl!


blessings,

Dan - Blueyes
#3May 19th, 2007 · 08:56 PM
50 threads
259 posts
United States of America
LOVE IT
hey i must say you are a
huge inspiration I love
your stuff you and pdoll
should do a collab Im sure
it would how you say
"kick-donkey"
#4May 20th, 2007 · 02:50 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
aww thank you i feel so loved lol thnaks you guys. i wasnt so sure i liked these lyrics, but i guess you all like em so thats all that matteres hehe thanks again boys
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