#1May 18th, 2007 · 05:39 PM
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24 posts
United States of America
Are You Pressuring me?
This song I wrote when I was around thirteen. Long time ago. Probably needs some polishing.
No comfort is given to me
No hope, there seems to be
No love, is holding me
No pride, is helping me

No laughter is coming out
No smiles, what could I smile about
No helping hand, is holding me
Only pressure, is given to  me

Are you pressuring me
Cause something’s heavy
You’re hurting me
I am suffering
Are you leaning on me
Or are you pushing me
Are you holding me
Or am I falling

No help, no hope, no love, no pride
I wish I could run and hide
No love, no comfort, no laughter, no smiles
You won’t see me for a while

Are you pressuring me
Cause something’s heavy
You’re hurting me
I am suffering
Are you leaning on me
Or are you pushing me
Are you holding me
Or am I falling

No ground that is stable enough for me
No sky clear enough to see
No kiss has meaning when given to me
Are you helping or are you

pressuring me
Cause something’s heavy
You’re hurting me
I am suffering
Are you leaning on me
Or are you pushing me
Are you holding me
Or am I falling

No stable ground, no clear sky
Your love for me isn’t that high
No meaningful kiss
Am I going to be missed
Are you pressuring me
Cause something’s heavy
You’re hurting me
I am suffering
Are you leaning on me
Or are you pushing me
Are you holding me
Or am I falling

Are you pressuring me?
“Are you pressuring me?”
Cause something heavy
“Very heavy”
You’re hurting me
“Something hurting”
I am suffering
“Suffering”
Are you leaning on me
“Lean on me”
Or are you pushing me
“Pushing me”
Are you holding me
“Hold me”
Or am falling
“Falling, falling”

Are you pressuring me
Cause something’s heavy
You’re hurting me
I am suffering
Are you leaning on me
Or are you pushing me
Are you holding me
Or am I falling
#2May 18th, 2007 · 07:12 PM
50 threads
259 posts
United States of America
cool song I wish i could write like this now
im 13....              
#3May 18th, 2007 · 07:15 PM
26 threads
24 posts
United States of America
well, not a really long time ago. a year ago or so.
#4May 24th, 2007 · 09:42 AM
21 threads
235 posts
United Kingdom
I ike the way you repeat yourself but play around with the positioning and add bits in here and there. It's pretty clever. I couldn't write like this when I was 13.
It's impressive and I relate to it cause it manages to explain your pain. Which yes, 13 year olds do experiance and not enough kids get heard in this way.
Good work man,
KI
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