I just finished this this second. I had this dream, (Don't know how  I remember it) and i wrote it based on the dream. It isn't that good, and I'm not quiet done with it.

I'm so sorry about what is happening
I am so sorry I couldn't hold you up anymore
I am sorry I let you down
I am so sorry, forgive me
Forgive me, please
Forgive me, please
I'm so sorry I disapointed you
I so sorry I didn't see you though
I'm so sorry for hurting you
I'm so sorry, forgive me
Forgive me, please
Forgive me, please

I let you down
I let you fall down
I hurt your pride
I'm sorry
Now I have to see those beautiful eyes cry
I let you fall
Fall to the ground
I'm sorry
Now your beautiful eyes are starting to cry

I sorry I couldn't hold you any longer
But the weakness inside of me, was getting stronger
I'm so sorry for hurting you
I'm so sorry, forgive me
You trusted me with your life and pride
Now I've let you down and kicked your side
I wouldn't blame for being mad
Nothing hurts as bad to see your eyes turn sad

(X2)
I let you down
I let you fall down
I hurt your pride
I'm sorry
Now I have to see those beautiful eyes cry
I let you fall
Fall to the ground
I'm sorry
Now your beautiful eyes are starting to cry

Dreams, true inspiration!
I REALLY like this line "But the weakness inside of me, was getting stronger"
Please post it again when your happy with it!

Yes Kings I like that line too.
I like the way you word this also
very smooth I am guessing
it is a rock-ish song? Maybe we
could collab soon?

yeah maybe.
I don't really know what to base the genre on... It isn't all screamy, but it isn't all poppy.