#1May 4th, 2007 · 03:11 PM
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This isn't quite finished. I don't even know what to call it!

The days they pass so slow
The nights they never last
Your getting so much older
So many breaths, so many steps
Your looking so much older
Time it comes and goes sofast
    It is strange how much time has past
    Your tear is shed and prayer cast
    You've grown, you've changed, your in control
    Since your eyes are wide open you won't come home
    You'll never see things the same
    As you did when you were young
    When you were young you saw things differently
    You saw happiness and good in things
    But now you just see pain
    Your eyes were bright and smile wide
    But now your vision is blurred as your sad eyes cry
    You'll never feel the same
    As you did when you were young
    Don't dream about them at night
    Live that time up, yeah hold it tight
    Don't let those bright eyes close
    Open them  before your vision goes
    Yeah, before your vision goes

    When you were young you wanted to be so old
    Take control, and be so bold
    So you tried to grow up fast
    You threw away your younger days
    Now your trying to find a better way
    To relive your fun filled past
    As it was when you were young
   
    Oh, Rest in peace
    My younger self   
    Faith is low and noonelse
    Is here to save you
    Oh, Rest in peace
    My younger self
    Love is gone and someone else
    Has taken over
    Has taken over
    It isn't the same
    As when you were young
   
#2May 4th, 2007 · 03:30 PM
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What about 'Growing pains'?
I liked the 'reflective poetry' of the first two verse but I don't think the last verse sounds right.
I find it strange that you 'define' and 'finalize' it and say 'that's it, it's over, it will never be the same'!
This bit sounds too much like a frustration slipping out! lol
#3May 9th, 2007 · 03:36 PM
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United States of America
Growing pains it is.
Yeah, i kind of slipped that verse in cause it didn't go with my other song.
#4May 10th, 2007 · 04:25 PM
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United States of America
nice song i really like
the lines in the first verse

                    [quote

                  It is strange how much time has past
                         Your tear is shed and prayer cast
                     [/quote]

good stuff man!
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