#1December 23rd, 2007 · 03:42 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Idiots Guide For Idiots
This is the result of my untitled lyric post. Thanks again Simon and Moses.



      Idiots Guide For Idiots

Another year has come and gone
How I miss your warmth in my arms
The love we burned can't be replaced
A distant memory that I can't escape
You gave me life, what it meant to live
Treasure you always your deep within
What was it you used to say to me?
Should've listened you'd be here with me

It took the end to see
where to begin
The boy you used to know
no longer scared I've got
the strength to love
Maybe these thoughts
show my age

Now that your lesson has been taught
Hope you see that our time wasn't lost
What I am today is because of you
All because of you, you you you

It took the end to see
where to begin
The boy you used to know
no longer scared I've got
the strength to love
Maybe these thoughts
show my age

TV's on I see your face
The skies are crying
It's too late
Why you? It should've been me
For the love of God ! The irony
Lightning strikes
Thunderous clap on my door
I must be dreaming
I fall to the floor
Hand on my shoulder
whisper in my ear
It's OK Dad
Swallow those tears

Mom knew you'd be ready some day
Unfortunate it had to be this way
Together we'll honor her love
She's always watching up above

It took the end to see
where to begin
The boy you used to know
no longer scared I've got
the strength to love
It took the end to see
where to begin
The boy you used to know
no longer scared I've got
the strength to love
Maybe these thoughts
show my age
#2December 29th, 2007 · 03:02 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Hey Jason...There are some good Phrase's in your lyrics....

"It took the end to see
where to begin
The boy you used to know
no longer scared"

"Why you? It should've been me
For the love of God ! The irony
Thunderous clap on my door
I must be dreaming
I fall to the floor
Hand on my shoulder
whisper in my ear
It's OK Dad
Swallow those tears"

A Little Bit of a touch up on the lyric's and I think you have the makings of a good song here...plus some good music....

Nice work....I see the growth in your writing   .. it's coming along well...keep it going, Buddy!!!

Ralph_Flyer

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#3December 29th, 2007 · 03:07 PM
76 threads / 5 songs
529 posts
Cook Islands

a-freaking-mazing dude!!!

like flyer said..great phrases!
"The boy you used to know
no longer scared I've got
the strength to love
Maybe these thoughts
show my age"

I,for one,cannot wait to hear this!!!

can't tell if it would me like"Cat's and the cradle.."rock or something acoustic? whatever would be awesome
btw,awesome title
keep up the work!
cheyenne
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