that's actually pretty good. it kind of reminds me of that new song...i remember what it's called but one of the lines is like this "little alicia is in the wold on her own thinking that hell is a place called home" or something, with a mix of pink "conversations with my 13 year old self". not that i'm a fan of pink but it does remind me of that song.  just a little. but it's over all pretty good.

And vent you did!

Really well too, a good graphic story of living in the dark.

It's got a kind of Springsteen storytelling bent to it which I really like.  Check out his storytelling on Nebraska for example, I think you might like it.

It reminds me of "Runaway Love" By Ludicris and Mary J. Blige