#1March 23rd, 2007 · 06:35 PM
26 threads
24 posts
United States of America
Fly away (Goodbye)
This one is a repeat of Fly away expect a different chorus.( I would change the name of the song)

The cold wind rips across the sky
and as it hits my face it makes my cheeks go dry
And I think of you
And I hope you think of me too
I know that next year you'll have a new girlfriend
But she'll still go through the same heartbroken
Days, that I went through
PRE CHORUS
Stuck here in heartbroken days
where love is lost and hate has ways
To beat you down and make you lose your way
I need to go somewhere new
Where I'll never ever think of you
CHORUS
I need to go
Where no one will no
Who I am
I need to be
By myself, I need to be free
I can't to be anywhere near
A thought of you my dear
So I must say my final word
Goodbye

Summer romances last  few days
I fell for you, then you blew away
Why, did you have to go?
I see you every now and then
Moving on is easy for you but i wonder when
I, will move on
I need someone to lean on
I need somewhere to run
Where do I find my comfort?
Oh Oh Oh
CHORUS
#2March 24th, 2007 · 01:07 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Nice
You have a nice writing style. It flows well and you use your words intricately (is that a word?). Don't lose that touch.

Love it.

WB
#3March 25th, 2007 · 12:43 AM
26 threads
24 posts
United States of America
Thank you
you too
#4April 28th, 2007 · 04:13 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
I like this one. I don't know why I didn't comment before!! 
Some of it reads a bit jittery for a song but must of it reads beautifully.
Though it does feel like I've commented on this before though!
I like :
 I need to go somewhere new
Where I'll never ever think of you

And its the 'never ever' bit I really like! Just like last time, or was that a different lyric that just sounds the same!!! I denno!
I can really envisage a cool guitar to this and a good clear female vocal, givin it all! 
#5May 2nd, 2007 · 04:26 PM
1 posts
United States of America
i like it alot
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