#1March 22nd, 2007 · 02:35 PM
26 threads
24 posts
United States of America
fly away
The cold wind rips across the sky
and as it hits my face it makes my cheeks go dry
And I think of you
And I hope you think of me too
I know that next year you'll have a new girlfriend
But she'll still go through the same heartbroken
Days, that I went through
PRE CHORUS
Stuck here in heartbroken days
where love is lost and hate has ways
To beat you down and make you lose your way
I need to go somewhere new
Where I'll never ever think of you
CHORUS
Oh!So fly away with me
We can honestly be free
No we won't have to lie
No we won't criticize so
mmm...mmmm yeah
Fly away with me

Summer romances last  few days
I fell for you, then you blew away
Why, did you have to go?
I see you every now and then
Moving on is easy for you but i wonder when
I, will move on
I need someone to lean on
I need somewhere to run
Where do I find my comfort?
Oh Oh Oh
CHORUS
#2March 23rd, 2007 · 06:58 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
fly away
I really like
"I need to go somewhere new
Where I'll never ever think of you"

Its the 'never ever' bit! 

I like this a lot, is it a song already? Because it reads/sounds like it could be a very nice song.

I understand the CHORUS and like it and I see it fits well but I find the 'leap' from : "Where I'll never ever think of you" to "Oh!So fly away with me" noticeably opposing! But its no big deal, it's a very nice lyric.
#3March 23rd, 2007 · 06:18 PM
26 threads
24 posts
United States of America
other lyrics
I don't think so, i wrote this song. I don't know, maybe I did take it. I really don't think so. I actually have to versions of this song. I couldn't find the other lyrics so I wrote this one. When I find the other one I'll write it.
#4March 23rd, 2007 · 09:01 PM
26 threads
24 posts
United States of America
I wrote this one by myself. Just checked
#5March 24th, 2007 · 06:08 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
"O lord please don't let me be misunderstood!!! "

When I asked 'if this was a song already because it sounded like one' I meant : Have you made/played/recorded this as a song yet because it reads like it should be a 'real'/'finished' song.
I was not saying that I thought it to be a lyric from someone else!

It sounds like it could be a good song! Yes? 
#6March 25th, 2007 · 12:45 AM
26 threads
24 posts
United States of America
good
K, I got worried.
Thought you thought it wasn't possible for me to write good songs. No, I haven't done that yet. First, I am a new user and I am still not sure how to do it. SO you do like Fly Away or Fly Away(goodbye)?
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