#1March 16th, 2007 · 05:31 PM
2 threads
Serbia and Montenegro
Loosing battle
~~Loosing battle~~
(©2004. Power Lines studio)

There are days when I don't know wrong from right
When it's hard to stand and fight
When everything seems like a faded moonlight
And when every step goes away into dark night

This life's always been like a loosing battle
When only thing you can hear is a rattle
They say we're all God's children,
But how can we all be brothers
When we're killin' each other
With no belief in one another
It's just a loosing battle
With no hope to win
When we're all born in sin

Every man is a sinner
And it's hard to be a winner
Born to lose,
Gotta live to win
What's so fascinating 'bout it
I don't really know
All I see is just a snow

Beyond this dark clouds the sun is always shining
But even when the moonlight is blinding,
I'm the only one who's trying
To see the light
And I'll stand out for the fight
In this dark cold night

There are nights full of pain
When you fly from dreams into some big plain
Where everything seems just the same
And there's no one to blame
It's cutting your soul like a cold cold rain
Little by little, peace by peace
Then love die in vain

Now I can see the stars above shining
But these days there's nobody smiling
So I'd better be walking
It's been enough this talking

Beyond all this sorrow,
No one can tell if there is tommorow
But life's always been like a loosing battle,
And only thing you can hear is a rattle
But I know beyond this dark clouds the sun's still shining
And I'll keep on smiling.
#2March 17th, 2007 · 09:11 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Are these songs, or just poems?
I don't actually understand the © on this one.
It's not that amazing! It's a nice message and a good way of putting it but it seams to be all over the place rhythmically, grammatically and poetically.
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